What I would have done to improve my magazine is changed the layout of the pages so that the text looks better and also added some shapes in the magazine to help catch the attention of the consumers more easily. I would have also changed the way the text is formatted because the text is to tiny and close together. I also would have changed to articles to take up the whole page instead of because i do not want a white border around the pages. I would also add pages numbers to indicate the pages in the magazines this article is on. I would have changed where the text is formatted because the text is inconveniently placed in the middle making it hard for the audience to read and makes it look very rushed. The reasons why I was not able to complete my revisions were because i could not meet my models that I interviewed to re shoot photos, I was also not able to access photoshop or indesign because I downloaded it on my PC and cannot turn it on because a circuit was destroyed and sparked causing the PC to not turn on and allow me to access it.
